We learned about a very famous New Zealander and wrote stories about him. First we drew a picture plan to organise our thoughts and then wrote our stories. Here are some of our picture plans and stories about Peter Blake.
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Chloe's picture plan |
Peter Blake was racing the
yachts and he won the trophy. Sara
Peter Blake saved the sea
and he got the trophy for the whole of New Zealand. James
Peter Blake is winning the
race. He is having a race and he is picking up the rubbish. Chloe
Peter Blake was a good racer
on a ship and people liked him. Peter Blake was a good racer, good leader.
Mason
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Oliver's picture plan |
Peter Blake is a hero. Peter
Blake got shot and he is wearing his red socks. He is brave and he died. Evan
Peter Blake was a hero. He won the New Zealand race. He won the red socks. He was going to pick the rubbish up. He is winning the yacht races. Sadly Pirates shot him. The pirates’ ship was brown and black and white. The pirates were sailing Peter Blake‘s boat. Oliver
Sir Peter Blake was sailing
on a big yacht. He won the New Zealand trophy and the New Zealand red socks. He
has to race seven times and he was so brave. Deaming
Peter Blake is winning the
race and picking up the rubbish. Te Aroha
Sir Peter Blake has won the
race. He is picking up rubbish. Ruby
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Ella's picture plan |
Peter Blake was driving a
yacht around the world. Then he saw a pirate. He had to run away. Bethany
Peter won the race. Lucas
Sir Peter Blake won the race. He was killed by pirates. Ashton
Sir Peter Blake is sailing
his last yacht race. Wiremu
Peter Blake is sailing the
yacht to New Zealand. Ella
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Emilia's picture plan |
The pirates killed Peter
Blake. Emilia
Peter Blake saved the sea. “No more rubbish,” said Peter Blake. Then the people listened. Jessica
Peter Blake is a hero. He
goes on a yacht and he was going faster and faster. A pirate went on Peter
Blake’s yacht. Peter Blake died. Megan
Peter Blake is sailing
around the world. Anaru
Some of these stories were read out a special assembly for Year 8 student, Avalon Te Haara-Barr, who won a Sir Peter Blake leadership award. We were very proud of Avalon and our famous Room 17 writers!