Sir Peter Blake

We learned about a very famous New Zealander and wrote stories about him. First we drew a picture plan to organise our thoughts and then wrote our stories. Here are some of our picture plans and stories about Peter Blake.

Chloe's picture plan

Peter Blake was racing the yachts and he won the trophy. Sara

Peter Blake saved the sea and he got the trophy for the whole of New Zealand. James

Peter Blake is winning the race. He is having a race and he is picking up the rubbish. Chloe

Peter Blake was a good racer on a ship and people liked him. Peter Blake was a good racer, good leader. Mason

Oliver's picture plan

Peter Blake is a hero. Peter Blake got shot and he is wearing his red socks. He is brave and he died. Evan

Peter Blake was a hero. He won the New Zealand race. He won the red socks. He was going to pick the rubbish up. He is winning the yacht races. Sadly Pirates shot him. The pirates’ ship was brown and black and white. The pirates were sailing Peter Blake‘s boat. Oliver

Sir Peter Blake was sailing on a big yacht. He won the New Zealand trophy and the New Zealand red socks. He has to race seven times and he was so brave. Deaming

Peter Blake is winning the race and picking up the rubbish. Te Aroha

Sir Peter Blake has won the race. He is picking up rubbish. Ruby

Ella's picture plan

Peter Blake was driving a yacht around the world. Then he saw a pirate. He had to run away. Bethany

Peter won the race. Lucas

Sir Peter Blake won the race. He was killed by pirates. Ashton

Sir Peter Blake is sailing his last yacht race. Wiremu

Peter Blake is sailing the yacht to New Zealand. Ella

Emilia's picture plan

The pirates killed Peter Blake. Emilia

Peter Blake saved the sea. “No more rubbish,” said Peter Blake. Then the people listened. Jessica

Peter Blake is a hero. He goes on a yacht and he was going faster and faster. A pirate went on Peter Blake’s yacht. Peter Blake died. Megan

Peter Blake is sailing around the world. Anaru

Some of these stories were read out a special assembly for Year 8 student, Avalon Te Haara-Barr, who won a Sir Peter Blake leadership award. We were very proud of Avalon and our famous Room 17 writers!